Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Argument-Abortion is just like murder.

Assertion/Claim
  1. There are many couples who spend years on the waiting lists, that cannot have kids on their own so they try to adopt. And sometimes that takes a long time. 
Commentary 1:
  • The waiting list for adoption can take 5-10 years.  And sometimes couples that wait that long to adopt sometimes do not even get accepted. 

Commentary 2:
  • There are numerous couples out in the world who would love to adopt children.  Because some couples cannot have kids on their own, but they still want to have kids, so they adopt.  And if you decide to give your baby to adoption and then later decide to abort it.  That could cause the couple to wait even longer for a baby.  And just because the baby could ruin your dreams, that does not mean that it could not make someone Else's dreams come true.

Assertion/Claim
  • Abortion should not be used as a form of birth control.
Commentary 1:
  • Abortion is very dangerous.  If you have a couple of abortions and then later decide to have a kid.  You might not get pregnant because sometimes abortions can cause a female to become sterile.  But there is only one 100% effective birth control and that is abstinence.
Commentary 2:
  • I guarantee that if abortion was illegal or if it was not an option.  People would quit being so careless and learn how to wear a condom, take the pill, or even wait till marriage. Because if it was not an option they would get scared about having sex due to the fact that they could get pregnant or it would make them be more careful. 
Opposing Claims/They say
  • Many people assume that one brief mistake can take away a woman's childhood and trap her for life.
My Rebuttal/I say
  • I believe that is not an excuse.  Because they know whats right and whats wrong. And having a baby does not always ruin your life.  It can help you become a better person and be more careful the next time you think about having sex.
My paragraph
               Abortion is a bad thing.  And it can be good.  But 95% of the time it is horrible.   If a woman is at risk of losing her life.  Then I would probably abort the baby.   Because you would not want the baby to go motherless his/her whole life.   But to have an abortion just because you’re not ready to have a baby. That is dumb.  There are tons of couples that would aspire to have a baby.  Like my Aunt and Uncle.  My Aunt was not able to have a baby so they had to adopt.  They did not have to wait that long due to the fact that the biological mother knew what was best for the baby.  So just because the baby is ruining your dreams, does not mean that you have to ruin another couples dream.
Thinking-
I am a Deductive Thinker because I like to confirm that abortion is bad, I want to make sure that I am right.